Five options, each a different layout. Pick one number and use that option's banner, headline and Featured tile together. Every option sends business owners to your one-pager, Our Remote Placement Process in 5 Steps, with the keyword “CLOSER”, the same one in your headline now. Each banner is shown at real phone size too, so you can see it reads.
I place trained female closers into coaching businesses | 350+ placed | $0 placement fee | 150+ businesses | Co-Owner, She Sells With Brooke | DM "CLOSER"
This is the real size on a phone. Every word is readable.
Doing $75k+ a month and still taking every sales call? | I place certified female closers, $0 placement fee | 350+ placed | Co-Owner, She Sells | DM "CLOSER"
This is the real size on a phone. Every word is readable.
A certified closer in your coaching business, in 5 steps | $0 placement fee | 350+ female closers placed | Co-Owner, She Sells With Brooke | DM "CLOSER"
This is the real size on a phone. Every word is readable.
350+ female closers placed into coaching businesses | $0 placement fee | 150+ businesses | 3,000+ trained members | Co-Owner, She Sells | DM "CLOSER"
This is the real size on a phone. Every word is readable.
Trained female closers for $75k+/mth coaching businesses | 350+ placed | 150+ businesses | $0 placement fee | Co-Owner, She Sells | DM "CLOSER"
This is the real size on a phone. Every word is readable.
Send it to anyone who likes or comments on your posts, or who's just connected. Swap the highlighted bits for each person.
Hey [FIRST NAME], I'm about to head out the door to pick up Hugo [from daycare], so I wanted to send this before I forget.
I saw you [liked / commented on] my post about [TOPIC] (or: thanks for connecting!).
I'm Andrew, AP to most people. I run recruitment at She Sells. We train female closers and setters, then place them into coaching businesses. We've placed 350+ so far.
I had a look at your profile and you reminded me of [CLIENT NAME].
The closer we placed with them is doing [RESULT] cash collected a month after [X] months.
Why it works: our closers pay $12,000 of their own money to get trained, then do role play after role play until they pass our certification. Nobody gets sent out just because 30 days are up. That's why our closer placement success rate is 84.6%.
Right now we place closers for $0 placement fee, and we keep training her once she's in your business.
As you can imagine, the 100-application job ad isn't a big fan of us haha.
Anyway, I really have to go. Hugo's waiting for our meeting in da front seat.
Happy to walk you through how it works. I've got [TIME 1] or [TIME 2] free tomorrow?
If not, no biggie. Happy to just send you our one-pager, Our Remote Placement Process in 5 Steps, instead.
Nice to meet you!
Cheers,
Andrew
Your one-pager is the first step. The workshop is the next one. Send these to owners on your list, one message at a time, and stop after three. Swap the highlighted bits before you send.
The exact way three certified closers were found, screened and placed in two weeks, so you can stop taking every sales call yourself.
On Zoom, 60 minutes · a small room of [SEATS] coaching business owners doing $75k+ a month · {Day + date}
It's your own case study, already in your Featured: a US company in the relationship space hired 3 top performers in 2 weeks, without placement fees. For Aussie owners, lead with Crown Money ("We are doing record numbers thanks to your girls"). For owners who've been burned by bad hires, lead with your own story.
If you've chatted with them before, open with: "Hey {First}, I remember we were chatting about [X] at [WHERE]." Then carry on with the invite. [SQUARE BRACKETS] = you fill it in. {Curly brackets} = fills in automatically.
Hey {First name}, I know this is a bit random.
I'm hosting a small workshop on Zoom for coaching business owners on {Day + date}, walking through exactly how a US company hired 3 top performing closers in 2 weeks, without placement fees.
Would you like to come?
Hey {First name}, I know this is a bit random.
I'm hosting a small workshop on Zoom for coaching business owners on {Day + date}, walking through how we placed the closers behind Crown Money's record numbers, and how we'd do the same for you.
Would you like to come?
Hey {First name}, I know this is a bit random.
I ran a business that did eight figures and I still couldn't reliably hire a closer, so I'm hosting a small workshop on Zoom on {Day + date}, walking through exactly how we now place certified closers in a couple of weeks.
Would you like to come?
Hey Jess, I saw your post about hitting your first $100k month.
I'm hosting a small workshop on Zoom for coaching business owners on Tuesday 20 October, walking through exactly how a US company hired 3 top performing closers in 2 weeks, without placement fees.
Would you like to come?
Hey {First name}, I was chatting to an owner doing [REVENUE, e.g. $90k a month] who's stuck on [PROBLEM], and it reminded me to reach back out.
Keen to come?
Hey {First name}, I swear this is my last message haha.
It'll be a room of [SEATS] coaching business owners on {Day + date}, and we'll go deep on how we screen closers with role-play test calls, so you only ever meet the ones who pass.
If you'd like a seat, you can book here: [LINK]
Once I see you've booked, I'll give you a quick call so I can hear what you'd most like to get out of it and run you through who else will be in the room.
And if you're flat out, no biggie, just let me know and I'll reach out for the next one.
Awesome, we'd love to have you there! Here's the link: [LINK]
Do you have 5 minutes at [TIME] or [TIME] today? I'd love to run you through who else is coming.
Subject: Your private invite: coaching owners workshop, {Day + date}
Hi {First name},
I'm hosting a small workshop on Zoom for coaching business owners on {Day + date}, walking through exactly how a US company hired 3 top performing closers in 2 weeks, without placement fees.
Would you like to come?
Andrew
Subject: Re: Your private invite
Hi {First name},
I was chatting to an owner doing [REVENUE] who's stuck on [PROBLEM], and it reminded me to reach back out.
Keen to come?
Andrew
Subject: Last one from me
Hi {First name},
I swear this is my last email about it.
It'll be a room of [SEATS] coaching business owners on {Day + date}, and we'll go deep on how we screen closers with role-play test calls, so you only ever meet the ones who pass.
If you'd like a seat, you can book here: [LINK]
Once I see you've booked, I'll give you a quick call so I can hear what you'd most like to get out of it.
And if you're flat out, just let me know and I'll reach out for the next one.
Andrew
US owners: the US company invite. Aussie owners: the Crown Money invite (check Scott is happy to be named in DMs first). Owners who've posted about a bad hire or doing every call themselves: your own-story invite.
{Company}: their business. "…for owners like you at Thrive Coaching…" (example business).
Their revenue or stage: "…for coaching owners doing $75k+ a month…" when their posts show it.
A shared connection: "Hey {First}, Brooke mentioned you were looking for a closer." Only if it's true.
A past chat: "Hey {First}, I remember we were chatting about setters at the She Sells event."
Their recent post: "Hey {First}, I saw your post about hiring your first sales rep." Then the invite.
Still taking every sales call themselves.
A job ad that got 100 applications and not one closer worth hiring.
A closer who left after six weeks, right when she was finally ramped.